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Life... so fragile.
Flicker of a flame...
Wondering... who's to blame?

Fighting for her life.
Running from the knife.

Trapped in a box.
Chained with locks.

Running for her tombstone,
A place to call her own.
Somewhere unknown.

Falling...
Distant voices calling.

Crying...
Because she's dying.

The sound of death.
The shortness of her breath.

Life... so fragile.
Ficker of a flame...
Wondering... who's to blame?
On September 22, 2005 I was having a bad day. I have been through hell the past 9 years of my life suffering with depression. My biggest form of releasing the pain is in writing. So on that day I wrote four poems: Silent Tears, A Suicide's Lament, Suicide, and Crazy [which I cannot find at the moment, but if I do will automatically submit]. Here is Suicide. Please Comment!
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ShadAlex1011 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Suicide is every where for me I cut myself in front of teachers who do nothing it's a daily thing for me to cut and bleed... I can try to help if you want. I've been trying to help other people with suicidal problems and maybe become friends. If you need to talk I'm here and going through the thing you are. I hope you get better from your pain.
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Bellykid5 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Suicide haunts me, it tortures me. Talk to me if you need hellp.
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darkchandelier95 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010
You're suicidal also?
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Fire-Link Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
I hope you're not thinking of committing suicide. If so please don't and also talk to someone for help or talk to me.
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natsuki34 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it i represents the... everything depression does
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Kirstin-Untamed Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007  Professional Artist
huh...^^ i really like this......yeah depression runs in my family......i just have it the worst than any member.....i had to go to a clinic didnt really work but writting is what makes me feel just a little bit better.....i write poems im thinking of submiting them but good poem!! <3 i hope things start to look up for you, and suicide, its not worth it....trust me i tried..
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Jauclyn-Productions Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2006  Professional Photographer
Sad. Love it. Great job. Life is like a precious stone, when you're dead. You want that stone back. When you're alive, you want to really be alive. But, to some. Life is a hell. To many of us, I know we've all felt it at least once. We all have that time we feel the need that our life is no longer worth it. That we need to die. But, we don't. We all have a purpose in life. But you have to make that purpose. Set your goals high, and chase after them if that's the only thing that will keep you alive. Or live for your family, your friends. It's not all about you. *Sighs* Ive been through the idea of suicide since I was five. So, no worries, I know what you're going through. I hope everything turns out good. And never give in to suicide. It's not worth it.

I strive until I over come,

Joi!
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krakk Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2006  Student
heheeh, we share some sort of bonds
we have been depressed since childs
and we write things, you write beautiful things
i only write. I still tell you that you can rely on me
okay?
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